QUESTION
IELTS Writing Task 2: Problem Solution Essays
The first part of the question will be a statement, followed by:
What problems does this cause? Suggest some measures that could be done/taken to…
What are the negative impacts of … and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

SAMPLE
Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

OUTLINE
Introduction: Paraphrase the question and give a general answer (Mở đầu: viết lại câu hỏi và đưa ra câu trả lời chung)
Main body 1: Explain the causes (Thân bài 1: Giải thích nguyên nhân)
– Distractions from modern technology
– Poor learning environment
– Lack of sleep
Main body 2: Suggest solutions (Thân bài 2: Đưa ra một số giải pháp)
– Promote responsible use of smartphones, healthy habits
– Improve learning experiences
– Provide additional support for students with special needs
Conclusion: Summarize (Kết luận: Tóm tắt ý chính của bài viết)

SAMPLE
Although the ability to stay focused is crucial for academic success, students often struggle with maintaining their concentration while studying at school. This essay attempts to examine the main causes of this problem and suggest some potential solutions to tackle it.

One of the main reasons that affects students’ concentration is the increased influence of advanced technology, including smartphones, the internet, online games and social media. These distractions prevent students from paying attention in class. Another factor is the lack of an innovative learning environment, in which students are not encouraged to participate in interactive activities that can foster their motivation and enhance their focus. Furthermore, due to their hectic schedules, in addition to using their phones, students are more likely to spend time on doing their homework and joining extracurricular activities, leaving them little time to get enough sleep. As a result, most students fail to concentrate, leading to poor academic performance.

However, there are many practical solutions parents, teachers and schools can implement to mitigate these issues. Firstly, restricting students from accessing their phones and promoting healthy habits play a vital role in creating a more balanced life for students. Because if students are given the opportunities to relax and recover, they will have more energy to invest in their own learning. Secondly, teachers can improve students’ learning experiences by designing more creative lesson plans, integrating visual aids and engaging activities. Finally, local governments can offer more funding to provide adequate support for students with special needs, which may include suffering from sleeping disorders, and other mental conditions.

In conclusion, while there are several factors that contribute to students’ difficulties in concentrating at schools, different measures can be taken to effectively address this challenge, ensuring students are supported and empowered to focus on their studies.

(297 words) – Ms. Uyên

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